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Nutcracker

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Tom O-the-Wisp’s axe whirls.  You don’t see it fall, but feel the thud; the frenzied air fills with splinters of chestnut and fairy-sweat. “When Mab tells you to build a coach, feller, you frigging find an axe – or gnaw a tree down with your teeth, if you must,” he comments.  The nut is cracked to shards (we’re prone to this; the least wedge of reality, the lightest mallet tap).

I paint from life, when life doesn’t intrude (with rattling and moaning, jeers, howls &c.).   My brush can’t keep up.  It’s bedlam in here, Tom, I say, and sink into a reverie.  Away with the fairies, I’m telling you.

A heavy-booted tread and Tom (poor little fart) disappears.  Called away on another job, perhaps.  They work him like an Irishman.

The warden makes his rounds and lights the lamps.  The twilit garden fades and lunatic reality crowds in.  I rinse my brush.

This place could get you down, of course, but luckily I’m on day-release.
Written for FFM Day 4: CHALLENGE.

The challenge was to write about a 'little known' historical figure, in less than 300 words, starting in media res.

I wrote about Richard Dadd and his painting The Fairy Feller's Master Stroke.  Dadd was incarcerated in Bethlem Royal Hospital after killing his father.  Probably not particularly obscure, but the two people in the FFM chatroom when I asked hadn't heard of him, and that was good enough for me.

Do read Dadd's poem about the painting.
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KiriHearts's avatar
That ʻyouʻ threw me off in the first sentence, but I like it. Itʻs a jarring piece for what was, I imagine, a particularly jarring man.